I was thinkin about turnin this into a kinda repetitive dylanesque verse heavy song lemme know what you think
Whats your favorite color?
I think that mine is blue.
The oceans skies and most of all your eyes,
Color between my lines with you.
Do you think that maybe,
We all really love blue?
But the way I see colors,
Is different than you?
So you might call it green,
But you feel the same inside.
The color fills the void,
Everytime you close your eyes.
Its that feeling inside,
Not the colors that you see.
That makes like worth living,
And it beautiful to be.
So don't paint a white picture,
If your souls dripping black.
And don't join the play,
If you can't learn to act.
But most of all be honest,
Cause as scary as it seems.
Your the only one who has to walk
Through your gallery of painted dreams.
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
Wrong section, yo.
This is for weekly topics.
This week is relationships.
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
so the songs are supposed to be about relationships? haha i dunno i just found this place
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
Yeah, when a moderater comes by he'll probably move this to the songwriters group.
It would have been perfect for the color theme afew months back.
As for the song, it's pretty neat. You'll probably have to shave a few areas off once you attach music to it though.
The fifth verse is the strongest in my opinion.
The only real problem I have is with this part-
"The oceans skies and most of all your eyes,
Color between my lines with you."
I'm pretty sure it makes no sense.
Anyway, keep it up.
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
it was supposed to be like blue images, oceans skys and blue eyes
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
