New song

Hey guys just thought I would share something wiht you I am working on. This is my first song I have ever attempted to write, and man its not too easy too say the least. But this is a chorus to a song I am working on, any help would be appreciated...I am kind of in a rut as to were to go next.

Im just a lonely man
struggling to find himself
my minds uncertain
and my souls afflicted

Maybe this night things will be right
I will find myself
And end this fight
this fight with myself
That is keeping me down