Daisies
The daisies on the table
Make her smile with joy
A hint of sadness in her eyes
The last time she had flowers
She was locked up with no power
She's got a smile on her face
And is wrapped in warm embrace
So long free from her binds
But for how long is on every mind
Mother, father, sister, friend
All sit in a circle with pride
Hospital free for so long
She's made it this far, they're sure
She'll make it one year more
She's got a smile on her face
And is wrapped in warm embrace
So long free from her binds
But for how long is on every mind
That smile on her face
How much longer will it take
Before it is erased
Before it is erased
Hi and welcome
when I started reading this I thought ..oh no another love song
But this aint no love song this had my heart strings pulling hard
I actually started rubbing my eyes ( me the big tough Aussie male )
Would love to hear it
Well written I think
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hi Rue,
there's a lot of emotion hiding in this song, I can feel it. Well done. There are also a few ways that you could go further with it if you wanted to. e.g. Maybe the smile will never go, at least int the minds of the loved ones cos thats the way they want to remember the person.
Good song
Cheers
Paul
