Hmm interesting. Im sure Descartes would have approved maybe his ghost does too :D .For me this song has a Digital Birth theme, attaining life/knowle...

Hi Lingdar thanks for the feedback. but I don't like the word "managed." I get that it goes well with the imagine for sound purposes but I feel the ...

Thanks for the feedback Renee I think the specific works better too.Thanks David some great ideas that I’ll borrow if I may. It always amazes me how s...

Hi guentherb121,I think there is potential here with a couple of tweaks. For me the song would benefit from some assertion in the chorus on the lines ...

Hi James,nice little song here that fullfills the brief well.Given the fundamental message is that everybody needs somebody/someone and that everybody...

Hi James thanks for the comments,"AND hold YOU tight"absolutely, I like that a lot (why didnt I think of that :o ).Im going to stay with the "The th...

Works for me. Although the last line here The head light’s smashed Tire tracks across his backBut no one asked where she’s been I think But no one a...

I love it. I think the whistling is really the point, reminds me a little of Jack Nicholson in "One Flew Over the Cuckoos Nest".I can imagine this bei...

Hi Neil,I like it :D and I especially like your chorus thumbs up on that."I always chose the third" yes I think that would be good too.My favorite is...

Hi David,yes I think "who's " could go.The thing about this song for me is that there are almost two songs here and I'm not sure which one to write.1)...

Hi James, well done with this, I like the crowd soundbites at the beginning and end. :D :D :D cheersPaul

James and David thanks for the listen and feedback.I didn't spend much time mixing and mastering this so yes there are a couple of spaces were the voc...