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Re: Y14_W10 - Digital Ghost

Hmm interesting. Im sure Descartes would have approved maybe his ghost does too :D .For me this song has a Digital Birth theme, attaining life/knowle...

7 years ago
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Re: SSG14 - Week10 - Imagine You

Hi Lingdar thanks for the feedback. but I don't like the word "managed." I get that it goes well with the imagine for sound purposes but I feel the ...

7 years ago
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Re: SSG14 - Week10 - Imagine You

Thanks for the feedback Renee I think the specific works better too.Thanks David some great ideas that I’ll borrow if I may. It always amazes me how s...

7 years ago
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Re: Sun Song Yr 14 Week 1 - Where Did We Go Wrong

Hi guentherb121,I think there is potential here with a couple of tweaks. For me the song would benefit from some assertion in the chorus on the lines ...

7 years ago
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Re: Y13W23 Everybody

Hi James,nice little song here that fullfills the brief well.Given the fundamental message is that everybody needs somebody/someone and that everybody...

7 years ago
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Re: SSG13 - Week22 - Secrets

Hi James thanks for the comments,"AND hold YOU tight"absolutely, I like that a lot (why didnt I think of that :o ).Im going to stay with the "The th...

7 years ago
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Re: Y13W14 Zoom, Zoom, Zoom

Works for me. Although the last line here The head light’s smashed Tire tracks across his backBut no one asked where she’s been I think But no one a...

8 years ago
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Re: Y13W2 There’s A Large Gaping Hole in Everyone

I love it. I think the whistling is really the point, reminds me a little of Jack Nicholson in "One Flew Over the Cuckoos Nest".I can imagine this bei...

8 years ago
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Re: Y12W44 Procrastination

Hi Neil,I like it :D and I especially like your chorus thumbs up on that."I always chose the third" yes I think that would be good too.My favorite is...

8 years ago
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Re: SSG12 - Week44 - Gratitude

Hi David,yes I think "who's " could go.The thing about this song for me is that there are almost two songs here and I'm not sure which one to write.1)...

8 years ago
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Re: Y12W44 Eat an Extra Dessert Day

Hi James, well done with this, I like the crowd soundbites at the beginning and end. :D :D :D cheersPaul

8 years ago
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Re: SSG12 - Week43 - I'm not lost - mp3 added

James and David thanks for the listen and feedback.I didn't spend much time mixing and mastering this so yes there are a couple of spaces were the voc...

8 years ago
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