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(@dillydally)
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Title Uknown So Far

He was a flatland walker
straight face talker
He held his hand high
so they could all see it
feel the power racing
from person to person

From the inside
He saw that no one
would ever cry
Yet they didn't know why
One action lead to another
he never bothered to look
until the ground shook

By then it was to late for him
he was murdered by all of them
sitting there in his own pool of blood
the whole nation mourning
but they didn't realize
that this was their calling

I Dunno,... lol about someone in our great history

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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DillyDally,

Good piece, but I think you are missing the point of the assignment.
The idea is to take one of the postings from Week 9 and change the point of view.

That said I like the piece Could be about John Kennedy or Martin Luther King.

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(@dillydally)
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yeah, i misread it... stupid me, i reposted one of Nitetrapper's songs

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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