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SSG Week 15 - Part 2 - Chorus

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(@mattutaylor)
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Hey guys, thanks for all your help in preparing me for this song, and as nobody got back to me on the storyboard after david i decided to go with my original idea but incorporating many that you guys assisted with.
Anyway here goes with the chorus

Chorus

Why dont they understand
I love their l'il girl
'n' if she asked me for anything
I'd give her the world
They say you can't LOVE
at the age of sixteen
but its dangerous to leave footsteps
in places you never been.

See where i am gettin with this song guys?

I really need help with a title as well.


   
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 Bob
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I really like this chorus it flows really well.  I have to admit however, to not understanding the

but its dangerous to leave footsteps
in places you never been.

Maybe you could explain for me.

Good Stuff

Bob  :)

PS You put a time limit on your last post for people to get back to you so anyone coming after that may well have thought you'd already moved on with the assignment.

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(@mattutaylor)
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Thanks bob,

that line - but its dangerous to leave footsteps
               in places you never been

basically her parents DONT know what we feel for each other, so they really shouldnt get involved in things they dont know about. They never been into our minds our more appropriately our hearts (places you never been).

Starting to make more sense?

Thanks again


   
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 Bob
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See it now - works well in that context.

Good stuff

Bob  ;)

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