This time I want to make the words matter
Cause so often they’ve been empty
My deception, my disaster
This time the melodies are new to me
Music of the truth has a different ring
Now what I am is what you see
The Audiovisual madness
That I fed to you for years
Choking on the sadness
We wash it down with tears
Nothing seems the same
And lies just can’t be true
But under all my shame
Lies the fact that I love you
This time let’s see what happens
When you see me crystal clear
And my own truth no longer bends
This time I know who I am
And I’ll have grace under pressure
I swear it won’t happen again
The Audiovisual madness
That I fed to you for years
Choking on the sadness
We wash it down with tears
Nothing seems the same
And lies just can’t be true
But under all my shame
Lies the fact that I love you
Hi'a Doug...... a huge welcome back....... I've really missed having you around and your insightful comments on my lyrics.
You did a grand job of this one, especially after such a long sabatical
Go well my friend
Ja'mir
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Good job on your lyrics. But I have one comment, the part
This time let's see what happens
When you see me crystal clear
And my own truth no longer bends
It seems out of place and nothing matches. I would suggest adding a rhyme. You may have tried to rhyme Happens and bends but they dont stick out to much. some alliteration would also spice things up a bit too.
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Hi Doug
Love the song,
I mean A love song It never even occurred to me to try something like that.
Great job
Tokai 12 String
Don't you ever give up on yourself
You did an excellent job with a very difficult assignment.
