Wrote this mid-week... never got a chance to
expand on it. Here it is in rough form. Â On to
week 6 now.
Sent a Mental Journey
Closing eyes
warm soft bed.
Curled into these sheets.
Wandering eyes
Image comes
Something there I see.
Package wrapped.
Nicely now.
Appears in front of me.
Ripping open
Packaged dreams
Opens so easily.
Sent a mental journey.
Delivered here for me.
Carefully wrapped
Never C.O.D.
Great play on words in the title! Nice lyrics -- short and sweet! Good job. ;D
"And if you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -- George Harrison
Thanks Gina,
I fixed the ending lines a little.
I like it..... Very unique with the three line verses. I like how the last verse has a 4th line, it adds some feeling to the ending.
I've registered on this forum only to contact MJBird, cause I looove this song you've written
I printed your lirycs yesterday and tried some music on them... and they got lots of posibilities!
These words are beautiful
I can do music easily, but cannot express miself well lirycally... but you gave me some inspiration here... I like this kind o' writting... all released to imagination
Please... excuse me for my bad english... How I said... I sing better than I write ::)
Wow...i am touched noel. Thanks.
Perhaps we could collaborate on a tune in the future.
Welcome to the group.....and Happy New Year!
