Heya, this is my 1st post in a looong while.. too long accually..
Anyways here it is.
I wish..
I knew by the look on her face
What she was gonna say
It hit me like a tidal wave
And washed my trust away.
She confessed everything to me
but I pushed her away
She's a scar on my memory
Stuck on action replay
chorus
I wish I never met her
I wish I could forget her
I wish I could remember
Who I used to be..
She's not coming back
And I cant hold her
I just fall apart
And the nights seem colder
Now im on my own
All alone..
If Practice makes perfect & nobody is perfect.. Why practice?
You should post more often.......
Doesn't exactly fulfill the letter of the assignment (don't think many have this week!) but it's there in spirit......I like the way you managed to stick the 3 wishes in the chorus rather than the one wish per verse format....lyrics are fine, reads well, nice and tight....
Good job.
:) :) :)
Vic.
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
I agree with Vic.
Reads will well and paints a good picture too. I see that there are 3 verses but it seems so damn short. Just feel like there should be a little more to this. Thats not a critisism, just the feeling I got when I read it.
Nice work.
TheJackal.
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Only dead fish go with the flow.
YEs, it must be hard to follow the directions on this assignment because I havent even been able to think of anything this eek. I think you did a pretty good job for such a weird assignment. Hopefully I'll come up with something that follows the rules like this one. who knows? its a really hard assignment for me this week.
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Hi Heelsy
A great little song - very punchy, not quite on the assignment but it was a stinker so I'll allow some leeway.
Good stuff - let's see you here more often.
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
