Curtin & Allen
The rain beats down
At the intersection of Curtin & Allen
The cars stop & go
Driving to...I don't know
Got another date with Miss So and So
Tell me something I don't know
A petrified mumble burning behind my teeth
I'm losing control on my own retreat
I can't walk another street
Isn't this where we were suppose to meet?
Oh, pretty sunshine, everyone here is looking at me so mean
I can't wipe myself clean
Oh, pretty sunshine, can't you bother to follow me?
The darkness is getting darker
So, I guess, Sunshine isn't coming home
Oh, pretty sunshine, won't you come home?
I'm just a slow-moving man
With my head stuck upside down
And there's people all over the street
I just want to sleep
Oh, pretty sunshine, I can't keep my eyes off my feet
Oh, pretty sunshine, when can we meet?
Hi PS
You have lost me as far as this fitting this weeks assignment ...
I like it and I can only find one little gripe with it and I do think it is a typo ..
Oh, pretty sunshine, I can't keep my eyes of my feet
surely you mean off not of
Now I am sounding like a grammar nazi sorry ...
Apart from that I have nothing else to say , well done
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Yeah, it was typo. I fixed it. Thanks.
I think it fits this weeks assignment, or at least to me. This weeks assignment is about one-to-one relationship assignment, right? Well, now that I think about it, it doesn't really fit the whole one-to-one relationship assignment. It's more about a couple different relationships. Sorry.
No need to say sorry it's just my opinion ...
I write something that I think is fantastic and someone says I don't think it fits or something along those lines , I just go back and revisit it , if I feel I am still right then I don't change it .
OK ok I have read this over and over
There is a relationship between Curtin and Allen streets
The narrator and the streets ..
I am so blonde at times ( actually bald but blonde sounds better )
No I am sorry for not reading it and understanding it before posting ...
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Whilst I can't claim to fully understand the song, I can definitely see the references to relationships in the song. Even the title, which as we discover, relates to street names is a relationship of sorts ... particularly an intersection of two entities. This in itself can be, and may be intended as such, a metaphor. :)
From little things big things grow - Paul Kelly
Hi PoeticSmile
Certainly a different relationship to explore than the way most people have gone - but there's absolutely nothing wrong with that.
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well
