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(@alterego)
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This is an old song of mine already reviewed by some of you but I think it qualifies for this week's theme. If it doesn't then please figure it out for me. So here its is again..

the forgotten street  
 
walking down the forgotten street  
i came across this soul  
it was caged in its faith and  
reached out to me for reasons unknown  
it was burning in its pride  
it was fading by its lies  
it was playing by its truth  
it was singing out my tune  
it was pleading to forgive  
it was rooted in its belief  
it was crying for its loss  
it was dying in the chaos and it pulled at my hand  
the feeling so dead and cold,i shook it off and ran on  
 
running down the street  
i came across this child  
she was trapped in her looking glass  
her eyes shone peacefully wild  
she was fading in her game  
she was craving for her fame  
she was looking for her friends  
she was trying to join the ends  
she was feeling out of control  
she was playing by her rules  
she was dancing in the silence  
she was picture perfect of violence and she came closer  
hurled a stone.i ducked and scared,screamed on.  
 
screaming down the forgotten street  
i came across this home  
it was left alone in its darkness  
lonely whispers that roamed  
it was decaying in its splendour  
it was brooding in  its horror  
it was crashing in its darkness  
it was holding memories timeless  
it was bleeding in its sorrow  
it was scared of tomorrow  
it was haunting in its joy  
it was fallin within,sucking everythin'  
and i threw myself back,turned around to run  
 
dizzying down the forgotten street  
i came across this soul  
it was caged in its faith and  
reached out to me for reasons unknown  
it was burning in its pride  
it was fading by its lies  
it was playing by its truth  
it was singing out my tune  
it was pleading to forgive  
it was rooted in its belief  
it was crying for its loss  
it was dying in the chaos and it pulled at my hand  
the feeling so numb,i saw my chains.they were on his too.  
no, i can't move, no.

http://poemasmuertos.blogspot.com/


   
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(@nicktorres)
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Hi Sachin,

I'm not sure whether or not to cry foul.

Okay, you can use this song, but you need to come up with a list of horror movie items not in the song already and modify it.

Okay?


   
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(@alterego)
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Posts: 83
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Yikes! I am spooked. Ha ha, Juz Kidding. OK, I'll try...

http://poemasmuertos.blogspot.com/


   
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(@mjbird)
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You haven't been hit with a deadly shot...only Nicked.


   
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