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(@sytys)
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you're all invited to the party

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cappo 3rd fret

music for me

D7 A7

the smokers in the corner are clouding up the air
they're puffin on a dubee, making thoughts unclear
the laughter starts to roll, the crowd begins to break
their eyes are nicely glazed, they're staring at the cake

the drinkers at the table are pounding back the shots
showin everyone around that they can drink a lot
stumble to the pisser, first to crack the seal
verbal lube's been taken, now it's time to wheel

the wheelers roam the place, looking for a score
someone to take em in, a pretty little whore
roll right up to one, grease her with the talk
inching towards the line, come on lets take a walk

ch F C (so far)

i don't wanna be like them
the people that i see
i don't wanna drink and smoke
wheelings not for me
the mirror owns the model
fungus heads aren't free
i don't wanna be like them
the people that i see

the model on her throne, is looking for a mirror
knows that she looks good, needs to calm her fear
she heading to the loo, to powder up her face
powders gonna help her increase the parties pace

the fungus heads are fun, staring at the roof
people try to join em but they stay so damn aloof
one's looking at a painting, one's looking at his friend
you know that they'll be comin down before the parties end

i don't wanna be like them
the people that i see
i don't wanna drink and smoke
wheelings not for me
the mirror owns the model
fungus heads aren't free
i don't wanna be like them
the people that i see

the musicans in the middle are groovin on a beat
gathering up the people, a common ground to meet
the middle of the music, is the place to be
sets my soul to singing, set's these people free

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sytys


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Hi

The first 2 verses coud be about my friends and me ( smokers & drinkers)

All in all I quite like this ..

sorry about the late reply

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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 pbee
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Hi sytys,
I think this song is great, well done. I'm not even going to mention that the rhyming scheme in V3 & V4 is different from the rest, because you already know that and it doesn't really matter anyway.

Great job
Paul


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(@sytys)
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thanks guys, if you like it, play it, as with anything i submit, if you can make it sound good, play it , i'd love to hear it.

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sytys


   
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(@sytys)
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nuts

sytys


   
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(@sytys)
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two nuts

sytys


   
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(@kkillam)
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From one newbie to another - That's a pretty cool song - I'll try stumming it out when I get home from work today. Without hearing it yet I can tell I'm going to like your choice of chords along with capo on the third.

Good job!
Kelly

Kelly,
"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely, but rather to skid in sideways, guitar in one hand, a beer in the other, body thoroughly used up and shouting "WOO HOO what a ride !! "


   
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(@sytys)
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hey thanks guys, i got er recorded but it ain't much, listen if you like,

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=484048

made a couple changes mostly in this verse,

the fungus heads are funny, staring into space
people try to join em but they laugh right in their face
one's looking at a painting, one's looking at his friend
you know that they'll be down before the party ends

the others are little, and they're in the lyrics page on soundclick if you're interested,

s

sytys


   
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