I was listening to Bowie when I wrote this.
Dear
Eaten by life
and the scriptures demand
It's hard to stand
but you
noble and unscathed
were saved
by the rush and pull of time
thrown into a land
that I can't seem to find.
and I waive my right to care
but I'll stick around
It's the best I can dare
cause' I'm afraid of this town
I see you baited
by memories
of an old house
and children at ease
of laughter
and a vision of me
but I'm battered
I'm tired
and I can hardly stand
you want someone familiar
but that's not who I am
and I waive my right to care
but I'll stick around
It's the best I can dare
cause' I'm afraid of this town
Perhaps a shift
in immeasurable fate
will one day take
the burden
the soreness and fear
and steer
this restless mind
into a moment
of ease
Dear
we can only see
©Joshua Aldridge 2006
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
Hi there
Yeah I agree with B'pig (Pete) it is a really nice song ..
Pete - gee that was a nice little pick up on the waver ...
I skimmed straight past it :lol: :lol:
You must be A Captain by now :lol: :lol: :lol: (jk)
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Yeah, you're right. I'll change it.
And thanks for the comments!!!
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
Hi Saber
Good piece - I can see the Bowie influence. Good imagery throughout which helps get the song across.
Good stuff
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well