Here my Attempt, please critique:
Unfolded
(Verse One)
Blue ripples in the light,
As the cumbersome curtain rise and fall,
Everyone has their time to shine,
Ever wonder when your time might?
(Verse Two)
Every bead of sweat,
Made on this stage,
Glistened in the spotlight,
Has ensured his success.
(Chorus One)
Line by Line,
Verse by Verse,
His story is told,
One he cannot rehearse.
(Verse Three)
The rise and fall,
Of one mans dreams,
Synchronized to every act,
The time has come to believe,
Every scene has a story to tell,
One which is reality.
(Chorus Two)
Line by Line,
Verse by Verse,
His story is told,
One he cannot rehearse.
(Verse Four)
My, my how is life?
Could you prepare?
Done so many times,
Thinking so untrue,
Only to see that in the end,
It was about you.
73's
Bstguitarist
KB1LQC
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