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(@rob82)
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Here  are some lines.
Nick if you read this I do take on board what you say I couldn't  rewrite invisible cage I tried to tie it in to the SSG about the sea as if I was trapped on the bottom of the sea like in  the film “the obsess “ but then I realised that I had no common angle ( and the original was SH*T ) but thanks for the comments

Lines
1 but when I seen her light up my street.

2 I have to go and hide until the stars shine once again.

3 hells bell have awoken me from the dream that they call life.

4 you can rest without fear of haunting visions infecting your dreams and causing more inhabitations.

5 fate broth us together are vanity tore us apart.

6 life is not supposed to be a struggle.

7 new faced woman old shoes.

8 I'm so far behind I think I'm in first place.

9 I lost my sole , a long forgotten dream.

10 the cold water felt like thousands of little fish each taking a bite.

11 I guess she killed you back.

12 his a lazy river or a slow moving train.


   
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