This is my first time submitting to Sunday Song Writers...
My three titles are East of Eden, Big Time Rush, and Land of the Lost
Here's a link to the chorus http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1058026
Lyrics
East of Eden
So I'll be waiting for you
Somewhere East of Eden
Because you ain't no angel Baby
and I ain't no fool
Big Time Rush
I ain't in no big time rush, oh no
I ain't in no hurry
I've been there before and I wanna move slow
and let the moment unfold
no big time rush, no big time rush
well I want to move slow, and let the moment unfold
Land of the lost
We might be from, a place where nothing is left
And empty pockets are full of bad luck
well I don't need much, in this land of the lost
We've got each other and that comes at no cost
Well thats it...this fun...looking forward to your comments.
Jeff
Well hello Jeff - welcome to the SSG, and welcome to GN!
Three good titles there - and three good choruses to go with 'em. Hope to see you back next week, when things get a bit more complicated. Always nice to see a new aspiring songwriter - hell, I've been writing for about 33 years now and I'm still aspiring!
Why don't you make a post in the "meet and greet" forum, tell us a little about yourself?
Looking forward to more from you.
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Hey,
Nice looking choruses.
From the recordings your voice is great too! Kudos.
Not much feedback to give yet, we'll see how these develop next week. :D
Jay
Hi Jeff,
:D Nice playing and singing and good work on the choruses...they lead a bit in a direction but are open enough for different stories to unfold.
Welcome :mrgreen:
James
Hi Jeff
Great MP3s man ....
Nice writting as well , keep them coming man ....
Trev ... :note2:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey thanks for the feedback...looking forward to the next assignment!
