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Y13W45 What’s That Sound?


(@jamestoffee)
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Y13W45 What’s That Sound?

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https://www.powtoon.com/show/fe6QD9VWRE3/whats-that-sound/ #/

audio
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13204322

What’s that sound?
It’s the sound of my heart breaking
The sound of my heart breaking in two

What’s that sound?
It’s the sound of my bones aching
The sound of my bones aching for you

They say it’s only puppy love
But to this puppy it feels so real

What’s that sound?
It’s the sound of my chain snapping
Cleared the fence; sniffing the dew

What’s that sound?
It’s the click of my toenails a tapping
My tail is a wagging and I’m coming for you

They say it’s only puppy love
But to this puppy it feels so real

What’s that sound?
It’s the sound of your will bending
You turn and hear me panting, panting for you

What’s that sound?
It’s the sound of my heart mending
I lick your face your smile is the glue

Instrumental

They say it’s only puppy love
But to this puppy it feels so real

What’s that sound?
Mmmah, mmmah, mmmah
What’s that sound?
Woof, woof, woof
What’s that sound?
Awoooo


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(@guentherb121)
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James,

I've been meaning to give some feedback on this one and haven't had the chance until now. I really dig this tune. The verses are really good and flow well through the story, but the chorus feels a bit short. The 2nd line of it "But to this puppy it feels so real" I really like, but maybe try add a middle section using the 1st chord progression and then end with the 2nd line/chord prog?

They say it’s only puppy love
(Some line in here that fits with the theme) - Rough example - My feelings I can't conceal
(repeat the opening line maybe?) They say it’s only puppy love
But to this puppy it feels so real

Something like that? Overall though I really liked it. Very catchy!

Thanks.

Barry


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(@jamestoffee)
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Hi Barry,

Thanks for the listen and post :D

James


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