finally! :wink: I could have rerecorded any of my already recorded pieces(as they're all quite poor), but I wanted this assignment to motivate(=force) me to finish one of those few songs that have been revolving in my head over the past weeks. I got the lyrics and the melody for them, but no idea how to actually set them to music. And it's been really frustrating and difficult to make up this little primitive guitar tune you're about to hear. It's also been hard to get it recorded. anyway, sorry for rambling, here you have the link to the mp3 and lyrics:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/whateverkeepsyouupatnight_music.htm
may I post the lyrics here, too? well....
ordeal for a simple mind
My brain is too slow
These cells surpass any expectations
They rampantly grow
Painfully aware of aging, this net shelters me no more from those mean mosquitoes
And my eye's itching again
I've been offered a simple plan
But I can't believe in brevity,
When I feel these bruises on my knees
Encore, I lost the thread
Of all kinds of communication
Anxiety nods my head
No sense for evaluations, these limbs would like a rest though I'm not sure I'll ever get
Up to my feet, banality, again
I've been offered a simple plan
But I can't believe in brevity,
With all these bruises on my knees
I can't believe in brevity
When I have these bruises on my knees……
dying to hear what you think about it!
there's also another version of it, with a funny(at least i think it is) ending.. didn't post it on soundclick, but you can always ask me to send you a mail, if you're interested... :wink:
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
