sorry for troubling you with yet another raw piece... here goes
hyde
sky drunk
heart junk
the afternoon's taking the wrong turn
chocolate feast
cowering beast
the keys and plans are lost now
antique truce
pathetic blues
the sea reclaims former property
expelled views conspire with solitude
it's a prison door
don't visit me
or spilled illusions
about moral intrusions
may find fault with all
the inadequacies
you with your generosity
and eyesight so weak
once liked about me
then it's downhill
for edward
sun cold
lies old
oh, what a let down
.
i'm a downer
.
.
.
i am edward.
feels better to me but maybe isn't at all.
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Hi Bna
the sea reclaims former property
Is a bit of a tongue twister for me for some darn reason , I am obviously missing something here . So I'll show my ignorance and ask who is Edward and where did he come from ?
Hilch
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
hey..
hilch, don't worry about your 'ignorance'.. if i hadn't written this i probably wouldn't have got it either
edward is edward hyde, the evil part of jekyll... for some strange reason jekyll&hyde just steal themselves into what i write lately.
"the reclaims former property" was "the sea reclaims ancient property" before.. isn't any better, is it?
hi peter
oh the meter... well, i could imagine the main part sung kind of like "song of our so-called friend" by okkervil river (bought the album >>black sheep boy<< this week and it's a.m.a.z.i.n.g)
anyways, i'm glad you don't hate it :D
thank you very much for your comments
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Thanks for clearing that up for me Angel
I actually like
"the sea reclaims ancient property"
myself ... It just sounds right to me
but I am playing in left field when the game is on the right field
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
so then it's "ancient" again, i guess.
thanks for helping.
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
