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hey.. late, i know... anyway:

erase, erase! [picture perfect]

i want a rubber to erase the tears from my face
'coz they're uncontrollable and i need a break

no, i don't crave a pokerface
but it gets laughable

when ev'ry tiny sign of disapproval
or his refusal to kiss, “just don't feel like it”
is an onion arrow
that calls upon the water
till i curse my wings
like a dropping sparrow

these sockets accommodate an ocean
these lids that should hide it
falter when soaked
till it leaks through

you almost always notice the waves
crushing against the shore

it either makes you nauseous
or sad like the vultures
circling above the desert
in my dreams of his poems

and i'm sick of adding more beads
to the string of disappointment
dangling around your neck

when you say it again
that i shouldn't weep so easily and must learn to accept opinions
i think of that rubber and swear bitterly tears shall have no dominion.

'his poems' and 'tears shall have no dominion' come from dylan thomas and his poem 'and death shall have no dominion'... in case anyone is interested.
comments as always appreciated.

cheers,
bluenightangel

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
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