Y8 Week 24

Sunday Songwriters Group

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(@jaythejoker)

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Topic starter 17/04/2010 12:53 pm

Fairly straightforward week.

Catch me if you can

She leaped up
And went running
Right out that door
Screaming catch me if you can
Catch me if you can

The Lighthouse

The lighthouse
Glows on the waters edge
Shining light into the dark
A shining signal of the heart

Alice

So we sing to alice
Who's right around the bend
The one we seem to miss
And the hand we have to lend

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(@2thtaker)

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17/04/2010 5:21 pm

Hey jaythejoker

I like the imagery in your choruses.
especially in 'catch me if you can'

jeff

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(@jamestoffee)

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18/04/2010 5:34 am

Hi Jay,

Agreed. All look straightforward and open for fill-in-the-verse stories :wink:

James

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