Hi Renee,Gosh, no need to apologize. On first read you simply responded to what you felt at the time. I can easily see your point of view. By my as...

Well . . .. . I certainly didn't see that coming. I think the chorus is pretty clear that it IS the little things that count . . . . that little thin...

Hi John,Thanks for the listen and suggestions. More often than not, my songs are usually in a much slower tempo. I tried this one slower . . . . . n...

Oh, and yes . . . . . . some of us are still lurking around this forum . . . . . . . waiting for Godot.Neil

Hi John,Funny is Fun. I wouldn't worry about using a tragic event as a starting point. You're not making light of it . . . . . you're simply giving ...

The music works. Thoroughly enjoyable! Well done!Neil

Hi John,Nice to see your post here. Fun to read. Look forward to your music version.Neil

Hi Renee,Very interesting and well written lyrics. Simplicity with deep meaning. Particularly liked the verse with binary world. And your theme of ...

Hi John,Really enjoyed this. I did have a thought . . . . . in your chorus you use terms we're very familiar with . . . . lonesome road . . . . seven...

Thanks John.Neil

Well done! I really enjoyed it!Neil