>I'm not sure why you think this is awkward. English is a second language for me, so it may be that people don't say it like that.I'm not sure exac...

This song would be a lot of fun to play in a band, I really like the second voice in the chorus.Although it would be advisable to lower the tempo, bec...

Welcome from another newbie! (I've started two weeks ago.)

If you're gonna "borrow", you'd better "borrow" from the best :wink: Nice guitarplaying! The lyrics fit this kind of jazz/blues song.There only one s...

Thanks for the comments guys,Then after all the deeds were done an ambulance was calledIt came up howling very fast but when it left it crawledThe two...

Thanks Vic, I do plan to post a song and an MP3 every week, just to get some experience and see how people react to it.We've already got one Dutch lad...

First off I want to say that this is a really great song with a very good melody.But I do have one small suggestion: Young boy, one day I looked and y...

Totally agree with Celt, the difference in tone between the verses and the chorus makes this work.One minor thing: I would switch verses 3 and 4, so y...

Man, this is dark stuff.I really like the melody and the chords. In the chorus the contrast between "letting go" and "still you want to hold the lovel...

This had me grinning all the way through, very nice lyrics!I especially like the way you took the old blues cliché "I woke up this morning" and did s...

Thanks for the replies and the kind words!The song was indeed meant to be mysterious, but I guess it turned out a little too vague.I'm sorry, but exce...

Really great song! The second draft is a lot better than the first one.And the way you sing it with a sob in your voice very well done.I do think that...

I'm glad you say you can sing them, I wouldn't have a clue how to sing this :wink: Fortunately you've added an MP3!I like the chord you play everyti...