can you do me a favor?
turn around walk away
try to forget this day
its you or the bottle
and whiskeys my flavor
it gets me through
the thick and the thin
with it, i always win
when the bottles empty
i always know what to do
tomorrows another day
a chance for a new friend
will jack and coke be my blend?
or will the captain set sail?
no, tonight's all about jose
from you,one last favor i ask
don't let them talk behind my back
remember me, and forget jack
i was good on the inside just a guilded
outside thanks to my flask
chad
hi chad
nice song i think there is something missing just don't know what though
8) 8) 8)
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
i agree i don't think it flows right to me? but i'm not sure what do change to make it sound better
chad
0.o one of the first good alcohol songs i've read, it is missing something, it was to short for me also... i'd like to see what else you can add in there, otherwise this is a great song
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
thanks for the replies guys... i'll work on, but i still haven't figured out what is missing? :?
chad
hey Chad
have been thinking about this piece and what if you added what the cost
( as in what has this person lost from his love of the grog is ) how his wife left him / lost his job / car / house and is now living day to day by his love of ( Jack and others) ????
just a suggestion
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
