great lyrics, i can completely picture the party scene and everything you are saying in this song, it's really easy for me to relate to, and its a tot...

what kinda music you guy's rockin'?

awesome writing, it looks like you just kinda Unloaded your thoughts, and it turned out SWEET! the last 3 lines have to be my favorite. You could brea...

you've already posted these lyrics before, unless they are edited? either way this is a great song the flow is awesome and the imagery and description...

AWEEEEESOME! i like this one alot gave me lots of emotions and made me think about things.. it's easy to relate to, great writing, flows well...

thanks for the suggestions jadiny, i agree there's so extra crap in there i thought of maybe one small change to the chorus...the pressure of my futur...

Hey lost,good writing although to me it seems like more poetry then a song? could just be me or maybe if i heard it, it would work better for me. but ...

Hey lost,good writing although to me it seems like more poetry then a song? could just be me or maybe if i heard it, it would work better for me. but ...

awesome post, really really captures emotion well and easy to follow like a story, i thought it flowed well good job, definently good if this is your ...

i like the it alot but i agree with guitargeek that i can't really feel it as a song? maybe if you had an MP3 or something so we coudl hear what you h...