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(@sjboller)
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I can muster up an MP3 if desired. Any suggestions or gripes welcome as always.

Asus2........................Em..................G
I know it's not enough with me here
Asus2....................Em......................G
But is that the way you always feel
Asus2......Em.................G
My hands don't realize
Asus2...................Em...............G
What my thoughts compromise

F...........G2....................Asus2
Here or far away ..... I'll hold you
F..........G2.................Asus2
Here by my side .... I breathe you

Asus2.........Em............................G
And I know if you'll take a chance ...
Asus2...............Em..................G
Don't you know this may be the last
Asus2........Em................................G
You have? Doesn't that bother you?
Asus2..............Em......................G
Forty days under here - under water
Asus2.....................Em........................G
Forty nights I swam into your living room

F............G2............Asus2
But I just want ... to hold you
F.........G2...........Asus2
Is it enough ... to lose you?
F.............G2............Asus2
And I just want ... to hold you
F........G2............Asus2
Is it enough ... to lose you?

Asus2.........Em.......G...........F...........G2
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(@ignar-hillstrom)
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Hey, would appreciate the mp3 to get the feel of the song. I have two minor thoughts about the lyrics, coming from a non-native speaker to a native-speaker, so take it with a bucket of salt:

"Don't you know this may be the last
You have? Doesn't that bother you? ""

I would change 'you have' with 'you do'. Just 'feels' better, can't really explain it. Wouldn't really understand what 'have' would refer to. Final thing is the 'compromise' in the first verse. I can't really understand what you mean by it, and I don't see the compromise in the rest of the song. That, with the fact that it happens to rhyhme, makes it seem rather cheesy. Once again, these things might very well be due to me misunderstanding things. For your information, I have a picture of a dude being in a submarine away from his girlfriend. I guess that might not be what you thought of...


   
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