Broken Flowers
I'm drowning into a painting of broken flowers
I want to see it the way you do, the beauty you explain
But all I can comprehend is the pain they're living in
The sunset is looking ill, you always find different words
I always seem to miss the path that you take
Maybe I'm sick today, that's what I thought yesterday
I feel so lonely, when you're holding me
I thought you were supposed to cure me
Maybe I'm lying and I just don't know it, if only
I'm drowning into a painting of broken flowers
I want to see it the way you do, the beauty you explain
I just want to see it the way you do, if only, that could come true
hey! I like the abstraction of your writing. This one sort of reminds me of an evanescence sort of thing with the lyrics, and the length of the song made me think of the sort of feel that Hello had to it. I'm really not sure why, it just does lol. sorry if that wasn't at all anythin you wanted or something, i just thought i'd voice my opinion/thoughts as i haven't been able to do that recenlty. anyway point is, i like it - your lyrics have a unique quality to them that i respect and enjoy, i definatley want to see more :)
I know it wasn't reason,
That made me do what wasn't right
but sometimes my heart falls prone
to the nature of your spite.
hey! I like the abstraction of your writing. This one sort of reminds me of an evanescence sort of thing with the lyrics, and the length of the song made me think of the sort of feel that Hello had to it. I'm really not sure why, it just does lol. sorry if that wasn't at all anythin you wanted or something, i just thought i'd voice my opinion/thoughts as i haven't been able to do that recenlty. anyway point is, i like it - your lyrics have a unique quality to them that i respect and enjoy, i definatley want to see more Dito :D
Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
