Hey guys. I haven't been here a while. I just started back up the guitar playing and came up with some songs. All songs are in the works, so I can change em, but I like most of it. Well, I hope you like em. I also came up with an idea, there are no lyrics yet, but it is called The Slow One.
INDEPENDENT
Chorus
(You don't even know what it means do ya?)
Strip those evil seeds girl,
Strip those so called "needs".
Don't let them grow on you, or you wont see.
1st
Douse that tire, paint that tire,
Any color you like
Just as long as its not for the bike.
Chorus
2nd
Push yourself hard, strengthen fast
Make yourself strong willed so you'll last
Chorus
3rd
Can't you see this Earth turning red?
Turn yourself green so you won't wind up dead.
(Chorus riff)
(You still don't know what it means, do ya?)
Solo
(Now were talking girl...)
Chorus
WOUNDED BIRD
Chorus x2
Can't you here me, can't you call me, can't you sing?
I'm a wounded bird baby, your all that I need.
1st x2 (with improv)
I'm bleeding baby, out in the street.
I'm bleedin baby, in the golden wheat.
Chorus
And thats all I have...
Vantango
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The Jailer's Daughter
(just drums)
You poor girl, how have you been?
I heard that your father didn't win.
So now I'm gonna tell you this story.
But now I'm gonna warn ya it's a little bit gory.
It's a true story, and I know her. I'm really trying to develop it, it's just been kinda crazy lately.
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hi there
just a thought why not combine the two songs ?
is this a typo ? or am I reading it wrong
1st
Douse that tire, paint that tire,
Any color you like
Just as long as its not for the bike.
should it not read ?
douse that FIRE paint that tyre
that's my 5 cents worth but Independent does read ok to me
cheers
L.K :arrow:
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