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(@pierson)
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Desire

I block my vision because I know I'll never bring myself to look away.
Breath taking site, engulfs me and controls me.
Shimmer in the glare of a thousand golden shards.
It is deceiving. One gorgeous mother fucker.
A trap, a lie, a hoax to draw me in.
But...

There's one flaw!
It leaves me laughing.
You can never infiltrate my mind!
I have no desire!
Nothing to tempt me with!
My eyes can see right through your lie!

I've caught one glimpse and now I stare at the beauty of this lie.
It's picture perfect. Yes, it's something else.
And now I ramble on as it slowly draws me in.
A flash of pain. Memories in my mind.
I break the daze. Jump back to reality.
Your flawless picture's shattered in my mind.
'Cause...

There's one flaw!
It leaves me laughing.
You can never infiltrate my mind!
I have no desire!
Nothing to tempt me with!
My eyes can see right through your lie!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@beans7178)
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hey man no criticism here but i have some praise i love the line i stand staring at this lie its picture perfect, or somethign like that. im to lazy to go back a page and get it perfect but i liked it alot, ill be interested to see how you put it to music, keep me posted.

chec out my music
http://www.myspace.com/spencerbeasleymusic
pm if u like it or send me a message on myspace


   
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