ERASE (One Night)
You are an angel
You're so nice
I am the devil
In disguise
You are the sun
Shine on me
I am the moon
Running free
You are the one – you'll be forgiven
You have the days - He wants to live in
I'm the mistake – He'll always regret
I am the night - He wants to forget
Chorus:
One night that never mattered
One night - he'll say it never happened
The night that became a lie
He'll forget, he'll deny
He'll erase from his mind
You are his star
His guiding light
I was his star
For one wild night
You are the inspiration
He can't live without
Me – a celebration
Never cared about
You are the one – you'll be forgiven
You have the days - He wants to live in
I'm the mistake – He'll always regret
I am the night - He wants to forget
Chorus:
One night that never mattered
One night - he'll say it never happened
The night that became a lie
He'll forget, he'll deny
He'll erase from his mind
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
ERASE (One Night)
You are an angel
You're so nice
I am the devil
In disguise
You are the sun
Shine on me
I am the moon
Running free
You are the one – you'll be forgiven
You have the days - He wants to live in
I'm the mistake – He'll always regret
I am the night - He wants to forget
Chorus:
One night that never mattered
One night - he'll say it never happened
The night that became a lie
He'll forget, he'll deny
He'll erase from his mind
You are his star
His guiding light
I was his star
For one wild night
You are the inspiration
He can't live without
Me – a celebration
Never cared about
You are the one – you'll be forgiven
You have the days - He wants to live in
I'm the mistake – He'll always regret
I am the night - He wants to forget
Chorus:
One night that never mattered
One night - he'll say it never happened
The night that became a lie
He'll forget, he'll deny
He'll erase from his mind
That's brill! Wish i could hear the tune... Keep it up
I'm better than normal, I'm abnormal! ;)
I <3 McFly 4eva!
well done brilliant
this very good well done
bravo
cheers
L.K :wink:
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over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
That is an absolutely brilliant song. Very expressive.
Well done!
Dillon
I use heavy strings, tune low, play hard and floor it. Floor it. That's technical talk.
—SRV
Absolutely wonderful! Brought some wonderfully sad thoughts to my mind (which is a very good thing!). I think your lyrics are speaking to a very broad audience. Again, wonderful!!! Can't wait to hear it put to music! Kudos on some beautiful lyrics!!
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"Don't wanna ride no shootin' star. Just wanna play on the rhythm guitar." Emmylou Harris, "Rhythm Guitar" from "The Ballad of Sally Rose"
I'm glad you all liked it. Don't be shy to criticize though... Comments are always welcome, positive or negative. Thanks!
You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!
You are his star
His guiding light
I was his star
For one wild night
I you want some negative points.... I don't have any cause this song is really good, but in the verse above, I think you shouldn't have repeated star, or you could put '[insert anything good here]-star' but I'm not sure if it would fit in the tune.
But anyway... it's still brill!
I'm better than normal, I'm abnormal! ;)
I <3 McFly 4eva!
First of all... WOW. That hurt to read (in the way I think you intended).
My only question is with
You are the sun
Shine on me
I am the moon
Running free
If I'm getting the song, then:
"He" = some guy
"You" = the woman he's with now
"I"/"me" = the singer (the other woman)
If so, then why do you want the "You" to shine on "Me"? Maybe "outshine me" fits better?
Still... wow.
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