Idunno I was just playing around one day and these words just came out with the chords...I've just begun playing guitar so its quite simple, but i like it and its fun...its quite uptempo the strumming is a simple up, down...but with another quick down stroke at the beginning of every line
Face in the Crowd
Intro
A
Everywhere I go and
E
Everyone I see
A
Theres a face in the crowd
E
The girl whos right for me
Chorus
A flower to bloom
and a trip to the moon
How ever deep I seek
I know my efforts too weak
Yet, will this be the day
I meet my bae--eh eh-bae
Verse
Wont 'cha come with me
for a ride in my car
don't worry its free
I'll take you so far
Over the bridge
and under the sea
I'm riding with you
and your riding with me-E-eee!
Well yep thats pretty much it....quite simple.
comments and the like are surely welcome
" We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of the dreams." - Willy Wonka
I think this song has potential. Most of it sounds pretty good, but i think you should look over it again... especially the last part of the chorus 'I meet my bae--eh eh-bae.' I think you did that just to force the rhyme.
Special K
I think there's potential there too; there are some interesting images in the chorus. But there are few lines that feel like rhyme-grabs. The car-far rhyme is a personal pet peeve of mine, but I liked the change of gears (no pun intended) from moon-shots to joy rides.
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