This is my first time submitting something here tell me what you think. The song is about being depressed and when I'm depressed I sometimes begin to question my faith and my values.
The first two lines contradict each other but that was what I intended.
Fade Away
verse 1
Fade away into white
Away into the black of the night
Afraid of what is wrong
though fear has been my friend for so long
verse2
Unfortunate blessing coming from above
with a hatred that once was love
It tears me apart to make me feel
That nothing here was ever real
chorus
Fade away from something right
To stop the madness in my mind
It leaves me hanging from the noose
this is my life I can't cut loose
verse 3
Look at me and see this pain
A color that bleeds and stains
It keeps me leashed to the earth
Unclean now bathed in dirt
Chorus
verse 4
So I back away from myself
Knowing theres nothing that can help
I'm lost inside of tortured dreams
they fade away into me
wow that really good i can totaly relate to that :) *big thumb up*
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
yeah man, i like that song a lot....you really captured the emotion well which is a difficult thing to do....i really like it .......id love 2 hear some more............
Rain Shadow
Thanks for your crits. I'll keep an eye out for yours to crit if you continue to do the same for mine. :D
