Tell me what you guys think I want some constructive feedback. This is not finished I just wanna know If im going in the right direction with this. Thanks
Its Homecoming Day
She wakes up and says its gonna be ok
she gets ready for the day ahead
a limo a dinner and a dance with a friend
Does she relize I wont be there
Or does she not care
Am I gonna be Replaceable
Or is she never gonna be full-
ly statisfied with the dance
is that my only chance
Baby are you missing me now
or Baby will you not miss me at all
Chorus:
Before Homcoming dinner
Did u miss me in the picture
And when it got colder
Did you miss my arm over your shoulder
Or where you fine without me tonight
when it came time to slowdance
where you fine to hold hands
with another guy
or where u not fine
and all you wanted to do was hold me tight
