OK, last one...I promise. Then all I'll do is review, reveiew, review. I PROMISE!! I'll keep my word. Even if you dont review me, I'll review you. PROMISE PROMISE PROMISE! OK this one is again about life and how i hated it in 7th grade...Hope you all like it...comments returned ASAP...
Hope
I'm out of hope
I'm out of trust
Where do I turn now?
You've lead me up
To the surface
Where there's no return
I can feel my soul burn
[Chorus]
This truth is hurting
I can feel my heart burning
There is no turning
Back from this truth
I turn away
To face the way
Of happiness
But I'm lost in this life
Will anything ever be right?
[Chorus]
This truth is hurting
I can feel my heart burning
There is no turning
Comments greatly appreciated.
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
hey there! this wasnt a very strong peice, it was kind of vague and didnt seem to really go anywhere, i think you could of done much better with it, maybe have another go? i hope u take my comments in the right way!
xx
of course, thanks :)
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
