I dunno if this is any good....

well I wrote this song but it doesn't totally ryhme,but I've heard many acoustic songs that don't and they sound great!! so let me know what you think...and tips would be helpful too!

-In your eyes-

Can you feel it flowing through your veins?
In the air, Through your hair.
Its all a dream come true.

Look around the colors havn't faded away.
They only shine.

This is what I've been waiting for all my life.
It feels I'm waking up for the very first time.
This is the night the stars will fall from the skies.
I pray, I'm the one that falls right into your beautiful eyes.

So alive, let this light be the one that brightens up your smile and make it worth everything.
Falling down... Falling down... Falling down... into your beautiful eyes....