im only decent at writing love songs so thats why there will be a few by me, lol, please comment/improve, im off to bed, school in the mornin :shock:
Waited
All my life I've been searching
For somebody just like you
When I came around realising
There's no better girl like you,
Your looks got me hypnotised,
Your smile sends shivers down my spine,
When I look at you I'm mesmerised
And if I lost you id surely cry,
I've waited for so long
To find someone like you,
I've waited for so long
But I've finally found out what to do,
When I'm walking alone,
I wish that your were here with me,
I love it when you answer the phone,
When we talk so happily
I don't want to loose you
Any time soon
If looks could kill
You would surely fit the bill,
I cant think about what I'd be
If you were not with me…
I like it. It's good. Simple, but good. The only line that I didn't like was:
"If looks could kill
You would surely fit the bill"
I always thought that when someone has a "look that can kill", it means that that person is very angry, which I'm sure is not what you mean here. I might be wrong, maybe the expression can mean different things. English is not my first language, so sometimes nuances may get lost in translation, but this is something I noticed. Other than that, nice job!
