i was thinking of something like 'puddle of mudd - blurry' , thanks for your comment

Thanks, does any one else have comments or improvements?

thanks, its sort of set in a dark creepy place, it wasn't based on my nightmare otherwise it would have clowns in, lol, it was just based on the steri...

yeah thanks you two i think i'l 'borrow' your idea about that verse hilch