This song had been a work in progress. It's a progression about going through different levels of crazy(so to speak). It's a song with mellow verses and static x like refrain. PLease write back and tell me what u think. Thanx
My Psychosis
Everything is my fault
Everything is blamed on me
The weight placed on every shoulder
Crushes me into the sea
Eyes fade into darkness
Imprisoned in countless thoughts
Each bringing me closer
To the point of breaking
Snap
Find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
Snap
find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
Can't stop the madness
Crawling inside my head
Just takes one man to bring
The monster out in me
Breaking down
Trying to clear the smoke from my mind
Falling down
I can't hold back
Snap
Find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
Snap
find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
The gun is to my head
And all I do Is laugh
Empty shatters my realm
I need to end this fast
Wielding thoughts more powerful
Than any weapon
The bullet sounds, the madness drowns, body still unbroken
Snap
Find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
Snap
find it in you
Snap
Fight it in you
Was it a gift?
Something to behold?
Struggle to great
For the young to hold
The question is hazy
Answers unfold
I think I'm going crazy
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I thought the song was good. Disturbing and dark. I especially liked this verse:
The gun is to my head
And all I do Is laugh
Empty shatters my realm
I need to end this fast
Wielding thoughts more powerful
Than any weapon
The bullet sounds, the madness drowns, body still unbroken
To me it meant that you killed your madness, but you were to strong to die with it. Always a plus. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
Hey pierson you got it exactly right. The end is talkin about how he got rid of it without killing himself, so beating it basically. But then at the very end it's saying that he kind of misses it.
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Wow, This sounds really good. I suggest the vocals could be sung similar to Welcome: By Slipknot, Subliminal Verses.
Just listen to it and try sing your lyrics at that speed. Its just a suggestion but this song really rocks!
I love Slipknot, Korn, System of a Down, Ill Nino, Fear Factory, Statc-X, Machine Head, Mudvayne, DevilDriver and South Africa's greatest metal band Seether.
