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30/08/2005 10:39 pm
Moved...to SSG.
31/08/2005 3:02 pm
This is by the far the shortest piece I've seen from you. Though ... short, simple and to the point - definitely not your typical style but I think it works. However, there really wasn't enough imagery for me to really relate to it personally. I couldn't find any flagrant errors with the rhyme scheme either ... so overall .. very well done.
