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(@impossibleprincess)
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Many years have passed
Since the day when love intrigued me
I had seen the end
But the dream refused to free me

Many lovers have come
And they all left me wondering
Thought I'd found the one
But there never was that special something

That special something we call love
When too much is still not enough

(chorus)
The only dream that never shattered
When my heart was broken in two
The only dream that ever mattered
Was finding a love so true
That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you

Many seasons have changed
Since the day the dreaming started
I had loved in vain
The dream left me broken hearted

Million tears have fallen
All of them have turned to nothing
I had my heart calling
But I never found that special something

That special something called love
When too much is never enough

(chorus)
The only dream that never shattered
When my heart was broken in two
The only dream that ever mattered
Was finding a love so true
That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you

You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Many years have passed
And they all left me wondering

That line I like but maybe change wondering to wAndering...hmmm?
Great song! Very touching.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@impossibleprincess)
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Anyone else?
Whatever the opinion, good or bad, just spit it out! :lol:

You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Heya! After looking at a lot of your songs, I noticed theres a lot of emotion which could only be put in
1.) If your a good d@mn writer and its not personal experience
2.) If its straight personal experience...

I think its #2... I like this...thats my only suggestion...my last post.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@jacqui1627)
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Hey great song, from the heart.

Afew suggestions.

That dream
I have always been dreaming
Has finally come true
That dream
I have always believed in
I have found it in you

I think it may work better if you took out afew of the past tense indicators.

That dream
I've always been dreaming
Has finally come true
that dream
I always believed in
I found it in you

it just takes out afew words that would make it a bit a mouthful to sing, and makes it flow a little better.

Just a guess, but this seems like a piano ballad...
would I be correct? :)

Great work,
J

"Iam a question to the world... not an answer to be heard."


   
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(@gjbrake)
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Wouldn't argue with a piano ballad for this myself.That special something called love
When too much is never enough Love those lines!

Great writing.
G

Listen Louder Than You Play


   
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