It's Like Heaven

Okay ive been lurking the boards for a while and now its about time i put up my first real attempt at a song so here goes:

It's like heaven

Verse 1
I'm staring now, into your eyes//
Trying to find my way//
So please dont blink or you'll disguise//
What I'm working for each day//

Verse 2
There's so many things in this lifetime//
That i wont get to see//
But as long as i know that you're mine//
My soul will be set free//

Chorus
Cos' it's like heaven//
When i look in your eyes//
And it's like heaven//
When i realise, there's still time//

Verse 3
The fire in my heart is burning bright//
And it's all because of you//
And with the stars above it feels so right//
I'm declaring my love it true//

Verse 4
With the ups and downs that we have faced//
I smile at the thought//
That the patterns we take, can be traced//
By the lessons that we're taught//

Chorus
Cos' it's like heaven//
When i look in your eyes//
And it's like heaven//
When i realise, there's still time//
There's still time.

Here's the link to my first audio, i know about the recording lol noit the best and dont mind the singing, i try.

http://www.megafileupload.com/en/file/24704/-s-like-Heaven-mp3.html

Thanks guys and gals

new link for those having trouble

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=514800

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