hey ya.
been away on holiday found something to say.
kinda quirky wee number. short i know but intended that way.
let me know what you think..........if you like.
Had my fortune told
to me it seemed bold
old val said
"ok your a bit of a looker,
try avoiding four divorces
and a hooker"
see this predictions
really got me
so much so that my
mind cant be free
how fast shall my life unfurl
to produce four failed unions
and a working girl
ill just take each day
as it comes
try to cope with the
twists and the turns
be a good man
try not to lose sight
and attempt to resist a
... lady of the night.
And i'll tell it and think it and speak it and breathe it and reflect it from the mountain so all souls can see it.- Bob Dylan,a hard rains gonna fall
I really like this...especially
"ok your a bit of a looker,
try avoiding four divorces
and a hooker"
"to how fast shall my life unfurl
to produce four failed unions
and a working girl"
the power of synonyms :D
short and sweet ties together nice at the end....a chorus could really add to it though.
nice job.
8) job hurricane. is kinda funny too in that "ok your a bit of a looker,
try avoiding four divorces
and a hooker"
part.
