Last Train (Working Title)

I've never done that sit down and write with another writter but it is on my things to do before I meet the the big guy upstairs along with many other things ....

I have tried to write with my son but he always always want to call someone a very colourful adjective ...or is that noun or verb who cares anyway , I m sure you get the picture ...

I like to sit in silence and think and thats when I write my best songs usually 3 am 4 am in the morning , I have a question though ..

When you met , the understanding of use of words was that a big hurdle to over come , like the word Engine on a train it is also called a locomotive or loco for short ..

Well done John and Aaron

Cheers

Trev...

When you met , the understanding of use of words was that a big hurdle to over come , like the word Engine on a train it is also called a locomotive or loco for short ...

Actually the way it worked out I did most of the lyrics and he did
most of the music although we both made suggestions to each other.

The chorus is 3/4 Aaron's and I came up with the chord progression
for the Bridge. He also came up with Omaha. I wanted to have him
leaving Memphis for New Orleans,N.Y.C.,or L.A. How Cliche :lol:

It's been a very long time since I've tried collaborating face to face
with someone. It was a great deal of fun.

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Hello Celt. That's an excellent song, done quickly and well.
Here's my input:

Took the last train out of Memphis
Looking for some piece of mind
Triyng to forget about Phaedra (Phaedra? A rhyming name or term would sound better: "..about that Miss")
Never met a woman so unkind

Not going to settle for second best this time
These hard luck lessons keep weighing down my mind (lessons always test my mind)

Got friends I can stay with in Omaha
Nebraska nights sure are cold (nights are freezing cold)
But it's better than the life I am leaving
Better than life on the road (life on the grieving road)