Mud Name

Hi everyone!

I worked out this song and I'd like your opinion on it... I know I need to change a few things but I can't see those errors ... !

Here it goes:

Mud Name

Fancy being and shiny eyes
Spit on us as we're eating lies
Proud to get a name easily
Should beware of stupidity

Here comes the wall of fame
Those bricks are made of shame

I can't stand this dramatic role
Buy some money kill dead people
Doesn't bother when you're spotless
Because he's born rich and senseless

Here comes the wall of fame
Those bricks are made of shame

Pride was hurt he began to drink
He drove that night before to think
Wisdom comes when you grow older
He'll keep his young mind forever

That's it...
Please tell me the truth :wink: