Let me know what you think about this song
I think i need to rewrite the chorus to fit the rest.
Piercing The Darkness
If you could feel my heart beat
You would know the reason why
That my heart skips
When you look me in the eyes
If you could think my thoughts
You'd begin to understand
Where my thoughts are at
And why I hold your hand
[Chorus]
You're here piercing the darkness
Bringing light to my life
Loving me at all times
Changing the way I live life
If you saw what I see
Then you could close your eyes
You would see you and me
Saying goodbyes
[Chorus]
If you feared what I fear
You would know why I cry
It's the thought of you leaving
And saying goodbye
If you saw what I see
You could close your eyes
[Chorus]
If you saw what I see
You could close your eyes
You would see you and me
We're saying goodbyes :D :D :D
Please say somthing someone, even if you hate the song tell me and even if you dont write songs you can still give me your opinion.
:D
Hey I liked the song. I know, I always want my songs to be posted on, too. It's irritating when no one posts isn't it? Here's a tip: Just make a small edit on the post, and it will get back into rotation!
Anyway, I thought the song was great.You'd begin to understand
Where my thoughts are at
And why I hold your handI loved that part. The words really captured what you were trying to say. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
Hey pierson thanks for responding sometimes i get down when no one says anythiging
thanks
it's good!!!
"i wish the world was made of chocolate"
[--Tyler Burkum--]
She's calling out to You, this is a call; this is a call out... [--Thousand Foot Krutch--]
Thanks guys!
