Please give helpful criticism on this song.Thanx
PS> I hope you like it.
V1:Prison of poverty.
Blasphemy, treachery.
Face abuse alone in silence
Happiness is run by violence.
No wonder why our hearts are so sore,
Faith no more
No wonder why our hearts are so sore,
Faith no more.
CH1:Tyrant
Death bringer
Tyrant
World killer
Tyrant
Control freak
Tyrant
Futures bleak
He stands above us all
But the higher he is,
The further he will fall.
CH1:Tyrant
Death bringer
Tyrant
World killer
Tyrant
Control freak
Tyrant
Futures bleak
V3:You cannot stand in my way
For I will conquer all
Do not stand in my way
For you will fall.
CH1:Tyrant
Death bringer
Tyrant
World killer
Tyrant
Control freak
Tyrant
Futures bleak
B1:I must control I must control
I must control I will control.
To live kneeling down is worse than to die standing up.
Hey, I'm a bit in doubt as to the subject of the song. Do you mean royalty as in money paid to people, or royalty as in the British Monarch and her fellows? I pressume the latter, but it does seem a bit too fierce for that. And what kind of song do you have in mind? Reads to me like punk or rock/metal.
