hiya
this is sumthing i wrote which is definately a blues song ....
i'd be delighted if u ppl lemme know wat u think of it
and be glad if someone wrote some chords for it !!
here goes ...
Step away , walk away
well .. u got everything u need baby , take away .
U say ur gettin' late , i dont care
but when i look at you , why do u look the other way .
he's knocking on ur door baby , take him for a ride
he's knocking on ur door baby , take him for a ride
he's knocking on ur door baby , take him for a ride
wat does a ride cost anyway !
well i need u girl , dont walk away
dont believe i need u baby , dont walk away
c'mon dont be rude ... and lemme stay .
hey .. this is my first effort .. so please dont make fun of it ! :?
Hi 8)
I'm not much of BLUES person myself but for your fist effort I think it's damn good , I am guessing there would be big riffs between verses ?
One thing that I don't understand is :
U say ur gettin' late , i dont care
??????
maybe ?
You say it's getting late but I don't care
A female being late to me is that she maybe pregnant . :oops:
But keep up your writting this is very good first attempt ( just wish my first attempt was this good ) :cry:
Drop in to S.S.G ( Sunday Song Writters )one day you will learn alot and you are given topics to write about , some will take you out of your comfort zone but will make you better at this writting stuff .
hope to see you there real soon :wink:
cheers
L.K :arrow:
Aghhhh
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I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
hi lk
yes .. there will be big riffs between the verses
but i'll need king to come and play i guess ...
yes advice about " getting late " will be incorporated in the final draft
made me laugh when i read the comment though :lol:
cheers !
I would have posted chords for you but like I said Blues isn't my thing I m more of a country rock person . wish I could have helped you thogh , also I 'm glad you took my ctritic the way it was meant :wink:
After writting the late thing and read it I thought oh $hit what will this person think :oops:
But please do drop in on SSG you will enjoy your self greatly :wink:
cheers
L.K :arrow:
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
