my first post here

The first paragraph is a verse the second is a chorus third verse fourth chorus etc. The beat picks up on the chorus parts.
I dunno if this is my best song but its definetly the newest haha lemme know what you think. Im thinkin about takin the whole end part and usin it seperatly with a different begining i dunno

Ripping up my memories of you

Im thinkin while I sing this tune
That ive been thinkin too often of you
I think if i gave it time
I could free you from my mind

And I don't think you lost one wink
Just walk to the bar and have one more drink
Cause thats how all the days seem to end
Just a cigarette to kiss and a drink for a friend

Whys my favorite song makin me so sad
I never thought those same words could hurt so bad
I guess context was everything as far as were concerned
Would someone tell me what Ive learned

I learned why snails bother with the shell
A heavy shield to carry is better then hell
Or at least thats what I been hearin
It aint really life if your fearin
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So I peek my head outside
I guess im a string cause im feelin this vibe
But I never seem to stay in tune
Just watch this blurry picture zoom

So please no flash photography
Just take this song as a reflection of me
Its better if its in your mind
Even perfect pictures fade in time