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(@homchz)
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I have never asked for collaboration help before let alone on-line so this will be a first for me.

I have this song idea, about how our small towns are all being turned into little cities. Hence the name.

Big Cities, Little Towns

I have the following but am lost for a second verse.

Verse 1:

We've driven these roads
To and from our homes
the same way we've done for years.
Though the route stays the same
They've added on two lanes
and we have 15 different choice for gasoline.

Chorus:
The big cities are coming in
to take over our little towns.
They take down the trees,
and spread their billboards all around.
For the Walmarts they promised
would bring our prices down.
The Big cities are coming in
to take over our little towns.

That's all I have so far. It is a slower acostic song, and I am thinking along the lines of Work buildings being bought and turned into Condos/Apartments for the next verse.

Any ideas,

Thanks,

Josh

Joshua Jones New Folk Singer Songwriter
Joshua Jones @ MySpace


   
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(@martin-6)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 418
 

just brainstorm. write down all the ideas you can think of, and see which of them turn into song lines. then just add some extra lines about donuts or something...


   
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