No Place To Go
come on try to say it nicely
you're not sad to see me leave
cause i've been entertaining
the notion that you'd greive
should have seen it coming
oh so long before
though it's me who's leaving now
i had to watch you go
you look so peaceful
by the pale moon light
and if it were another time
i'd climb in to hold you tight
instead i see betrayal
and i feel my anger grow
so i'm packing up my only things
with no place to go
i know that i've been lower but
i can't think of when
driving round for hours
so my will won't bend
running through my memory
trying to think of where to go
guess it doesn't matter now
that i've lost my home
*Please tell me this songs strengths and weekness's
All great works require 1% Inspiration and 99% perspiration
hey over all i like this song. I might change the last verse I believe it is to me to make it seem to flow better something like:
I know that i've been lower but,
I DON'T REMEMBER when,
Driving round for hours,
*This next line doesn't make sense*
so my will won't bend, *I'm not sure I understand what you mean*
Running through my memories,
Try to think of where to go,
Guess it doesn't matter now,
Cause I have lost my home...
Just a suggestion don't take my opinion if you don't like it.
